tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5249095349151967348.post5209976615651064784..comments2021-11-02T06:38:51.778-05:00Comments on Flash Fiction Carnival: The Blog: Pamela Twining: Vision QuestFFC@Facebookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07792891845110881427noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5249095349151967348.post-61849442986892294532009-05-20T21:27:35.274-05:002009-05-20T21:27:35.274-05:00This seems like a small part of a larger work. It...This seems like a small part of a larger work. It definitely pulls you in and makes you know the character. I wanted to know more about Little Bird at the end. The details you used to describe him were spot-on. Let me know when you finish the novel...:)Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00251378244452084924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5249095349151967348.post-4445237132456626312009-05-16T07:32:00.000-05:002009-05-16T07:32:00.000-05:00I liked the ending the post in this piece. The eag...I liked the ending the post in this piece. The eagle coming down and the man renaming himself. Nice work :-)Benjamin Solahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10657105522335752577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5249095349151967348.post-20432005233255667302009-05-15T09:07:00.000-05:002009-05-15T09:07:00.000-05:00Well done! This a great story, and has a really p...Well done! This a great story, and has a really polished feel to it. I don't think I can make a single suggestion!<br /><br />Great work!Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17115607826522443897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5249095349151967348.post-82281298973418799192009-05-14T21:08:00.000-05:002009-05-14T21:08:00.000-05:00"There was no moon, but the sky was alight with co..."There was no moon, but the sky was alight with countless stars." I LOVE nights like this! The great descriptive text made me feel like I was right there too.<br />Excellent. :-)quezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270700636134226124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5249095349151967348.post-53578541352319098302009-05-14T13:37:00.000-05:002009-05-14T13:37:00.000-05:00I really enjoyed this.
It drew me in and I really...I really enjoyed this.<br /><br />It drew me in and I really felt the mood of this piece.<br /><br />Bravo!A Synchronistic Catalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08813938889249244878noreply@blogger.com